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The full moon rises in the sky, shining through the window and illuminating her quaint form, which slowly rises and falls with each breath. A light breeze blows through, gently rustling her plaid pink and black curtains, whipping past and teasing the kitten's pink whiskers.

Her nose twitches at the breeze. She rolls over, pulling her checkered black and pink blanket off the bed. The blanket's weight then pulls it off of the sleeping kitten, exposing her pale white fur, covered only by her long black nightshirt, to the cool wind.

Another breeze blows through, whipping past her fur and tickling her whiskers again. She shivers, stirring from her slumber.

Turning her ears back from the cold, she curls her fluffy white tail around her to keep warm. One paw begins to hop around the bed, searching for her blanket, but only finding her pillows and her tail.

She whines. "Where's that damn blanket...?" She whimpers at the cold, paw hopping fussily around her bed. Finally, she brings her other paw up to rub her eyes, opening them, which then cast a faint pink glow around her room. She sits up, stretches, and yawns, illuminating the dark corner under the window with a soft pink glow. She blinks, glancing down to the blanket, then up to the open window and the moon beyond it. "When did I open the window?"

Slowly, she turns to the side of the bed, reaching for her blanket on the floor.

A soft voice from outside whispers, "Isabelle...? Izzy! Pssst! Hey, are you awake?"

She blinks, holding completely still, save for her ears pivoting and rotating, listening for the voice.
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Author's Comments

This is a short part of a story I'm attempting, just for practice I suppose. I still haven't figured out who I want to have opened the window and wake her up.

The kitten's name, obviously, is Isabelle, an albino with bioluminescence. Freaky, huh? :D
And while she might be female, she's also... well, I'll leave that up to you to extrapolate.

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:iconvalamon:
very well written, love the details.

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It's all in your head but it's not your role You've got to get away from the dark You are the rising thunder Deep inside you hold a violent scene You are hates creation But what you really are it depends on you - Entwine
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Aha, thank you. x3;
And thanks for the fave too. :D

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"A wise old owl sat in an oak, the more he sat the less he spoke, the less he spoke the more he heard, now why aren't we like that old bird?"
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:iconvalamon:
you're welcome ^^

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It's all in your head but it's not your role You've got to get away from the dark You are the rising thunder Deep inside you hold a violent scene You are hates creation But what you really are it depends on you - Entwine
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This is still love. And I'm glad you fixed those words. xD It was really bothering the hell outta me.

I've no critique, just a craving for more...

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You're a bit off; I may be a canine, but I'm not a dog. Instead of bitch, try the word vixen next time.
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Thanks, I love it too. :lol:

Yeah, I went and did that the minute you said about it so I wouldn't forget. =p

Mooore... :ohnoes: Workin' on it! :D

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"A wise old owl sat in an oak, the more he sat the less he spoke, the less he spoke the more he heard, now why aren't we like that old bird?"
Icon created by the talented =McKaelaKaiyou
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Ehehe. <3

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You're a bit off; I may be a canine, but I'm not a dog. Instead of bitch, try the word vixen next time.
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:D
<3

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"A wise old owl sat in an oak, the more he sat the less he spoke, the less he spoke the more he heard, now why aren't we like that old bird?"
Icon created by the talented =McKaelaKaiyou

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